. . . . . . . did you know that i sit next to you now in the tiniest house of time?

only by air

to disconnect from you
my heart stops a little
as if a part of me given… yet unreceived
and i leave myself behind
to watch with no voice
looking back as if a dream.

then you flap your wings
and come to me
no time passed
and you remind me
we are both sharing the same wind
i am resting, maybe sleeping
always feeling

the force that moves between us
and through things
held together
only by air.

© r.e.l. 4/21/10

**this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 15 (reflections, interpretations, and musings) on Jingle Poetry

Winner of The Celebrate Poet of 2010 Award (with Promising Poets  and Jingle Poetry)


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8 Responses

  1. Jingle

    holding by air?

    lovely thinking…
    thanks for sharing.

    December 19, 2010 at 7:58 pm

    • it’s what a long distance relationship becomes … ;)

      December 19, 2010 at 8:00 pm

  2. A very good write

    December 19, 2010 at 11:51 pm

    • thank you… air keeps us together :)

      December 20, 2010 at 7:43 am

  3. We are held together only by air as the force moves between us. Well written.

    December 20, 2010 at 2:26 pm

    • yes “the force” :)
      thanks…

      December 20, 2010 at 2:28 pm

  4. The last few lines are superb…
    deep emotions…I love it :)

    December 22, 2010 at 12:49 pm

    • yes, that force is strong.. ;)

      December 22, 2010 at 1:52 pm

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