i built you
i built you
to shield me from the world
with knights, dragons and swords
to fend for the delicate
precious
parts that lie inside
shadows…
dreams…
escape…
you kept me safe
so that i could go on my path
alone
although i owe you a lot
i no longer need you
i let the water
wash you away now
slowly it drips
so that i no longer have to pretend
that you
are stronger than me
© r.e.l. 6/23/10
photo on wikimedia (edited by r.e.l.)
Very nice poem…so much like the imaginary friends children have…until they gain their own personal strength…well said.
June 23, 2010 at 9:19 pm
yes, and the child that lives on in us even as adults
June 26, 2010 at 11:26 am
yes, and the child that lives on in us even as adults
June 25, 2010 at 10:51 am
Beautiful poem, thank you, it resonates with my on life
December 30, 2010 at 1:12 pm
i’m glad you found this one in my archives.. i loved the sand castle too..
December 30, 2010 at 1:42 pm