. . . . . . . did you know that i sit next to you now in the tiniest house of time?

dusty shadows

shadows
you are covered with dust
aren’t you… but i visit you now
anyway
to see you, like an old friend
whom i’ve lost
you know that you’ve hidden from me all this time

but now, better not to quench your thirst

what i see … is … my wind
that will expose the ashes and bareness left behind

you breathe in the deepest part of the water
but it’s ok
the dust leaves a mountain, and a place
to see your golden shadow

“in giving you are throwing a bridge across the chasm of your solitude..”
~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry~ (from The Wisdom of the Sands)

© r.e.l. 9/29/10

inspired by a mountain of sand and the song Undertow by Warpaint

posted for Poetry Potluck 6/5-6/11/11 “Inspired by a Song” on Jingle Poetry

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14 Responses

  1. Good day!This was a really fabulous post!
    I come from itlay, I was luck to search your Topics in digg
    Also I learn much in your subject really thanks very much i will come every day

    October 2, 2010 at 12:38 pm

    • Thank you very much. Gratzi :) I post often so glad to have you keep visiting… :) -robin

      October 2, 2010 at 2:29 pm

  2. A.B. Thomas

    Fantastic images your words provoke, great write!

    June 6, 2011 at 5:34 am

    • robin

      thanks, anthony… still rings true in my mind from last year

      June 6, 2011 at 8:01 am

  3. “the dust leaves a mountain, and a place
    to see your golden shadow” — very interesting. wonderful write :)

    June 6, 2011 at 7:55 am

    • robin

      thanks!

      June 6, 2011 at 8:02 am

  4. Somehow I wasn’t surprised to see the quote by Saint-Exupery. This felt a bit like the Sahara. Wonderful write.

    June 6, 2011 at 1:58 pm

    • robin

      like The Little Prince, huh. i see it now (i must have had that in my mind ;)

      June 6, 2011 at 2:34 pm

  5. Absolutely breathtaking I don’t know of the artist you refer but this true artistry

    June 6, 2011 at 10:41 pm

    • robin

      i only used a few lines from a Warpaint song but the vibe of the lyrics are here… glad you enjoyed…

      June 6, 2011 at 10:49 pm

  6. speaks of solitude, aloneness with a hint of strength, no fear at all. That is cool! If only Antoine was right! :(
    enjoy the potluck!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/06/03/omega/

    June 7, 2011 at 4:51 am

    • robin

      i loved the photo…

      June 7, 2011 at 7:11 am

  7. a lovely combination of photo and song, well written

    June 8, 2011 at 2:33 pm

    • robin

      thanks, yea i need to go listen to that song right now in fact ;) thanks for stopping by

      June 8, 2011 at 2:41 pm

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