different forms, as treasures
you ask me to be still
and so i do..
you lie hidden within, unfelt
with a shield strong as stone
pushing you away.
in all directions.
don’t you hear the answers now?
as they quietly become one with the search
for what is touching you?
you are beautiful
everything is alive
in different forms
as treasures.
watch time stand still with me. ok?
help me to let go and to become one with the mystery.
please.
© r.e.l. 11/26/10
**This post is for Thursday Poets Rally Week 34 (12/2-12/8/10) on Promising Poets. Received the Perfect Poet Award…. Thanks so much, I accept 
[For week 35 I nominate Jargnar]
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Thanks for including me on your poetry site
Much appreciated….
December 1, 2010 at 12:19 pm
i answered the questions on your site for entry into your week 34 Thursday Poets Rally. i’m honored.
December 1, 2010 at 12:35 pm
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so divine word flow.
love the rhymes and imagery…
I am thrilled to have you in…
scan the participants list, enjoy the treats.
let me know via commenting after you are done with 18 comments.
have fun!
December 1, 2010 at 12:46 pm
thank you, i will… doing it now..
December 1, 2010 at 12:48 pm
Love the last stanza especially! Wonderfully written
December 1, 2010 at 5:36 pm
my favorite part too
thanks for reading..
December 1, 2010 at 6:59 pm
Awesome. I will watch time stand still with you
December 1, 2010 at 7:03 pm
December 1, 2010 at 7:04 pm
Simply beautiful! Great poem!
December 1, 2010 at 10:59 pm
December 2, 2010 at 5:34 am
the last made me read this again .. And still i am stuck at the last line .. there is a lot behind the thought !
December 2, 2010 at 12:26 am
i’m glad. that was the image i wanted to end with.. a last line that hangs… i’m glad you felt it
December 2, 2010 at 5:33 am
wonderful write
mine is here:
http://chinmay28.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/a-malignant-grief-2/
December 2, 2010 at 4:42 am
thank you.. .and i enjoyed the emotion in yours as well. let’s keep in touch
December 2, 2010 at 5:32 am
Your a great poet
Ty so much for sharing this wonderful poem and for visiting my page as well
December 2, 2010 at 9:07 am
thank you… you are too
i’m happy that Jingle found me and this wonderful community… i’ll visit again soon.
December 2, 2010 at 9:09 am
A beautiful poem, so well penned.
Anita.
December 2, 2010 at 2:32 pm
thank you
December 2, 2010 at 4:56 pm
Oh, I love this! Beautiful!
December 2, 2010 at 8:25 pm
Thank you.. you are kind
December 3, 2010 at 7:02 am
Impassioned cry. Well done. Happy Rally. Hope you enjoy your visitors and visits.
December 6, 2010 at 2:25 pm
thank you
yes…
December 6, 2010 at 2:30 pm
A little push and pull action going on… Good stuffs
December 8, 2010 at 12:52 pm
yea… thanks for your comment..
December 8, 2010 at 9:34 pm
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thanks for the honor
December 11, 2010 at 6:59 pm
Love this. Speaks to my heart at the moment.
December 12, 2010 at 6:21 am
glad you found it. mine too
December 12, 2010 at 1:05 pm
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