. . . . . . . did you know that i sit next to you now in the tiniest house of time?

a silent observer

 

i am a silent observer
of you..
when you least expect it
you will feel someone
peering into
your soul

© r.e.l. 12/2/10

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11 Responses

  1. NotATameLion

    So short but so haunting. Thanks for posting this.

    December 5, 2010 at 4:48 am

    • you’re welcome.. sometimes less words say more.. ;)

      December 5, 2010 at 4:50 am

  2. effective yet short < they are perhaps the best ones

    December 5, 2010 at 7:44 am

    • agreed :)

      December 5, 2010 at 7:53 am

  3. So much conveyed in so few words. Haunting. Lovely. Well done!

    December 5, 2010 at 9:06 am

    • Thank you ;)

      December 5, 2010 at 9:23 am

  4. Captain DaPoet

    This describes my feeling whenever I attend one of my wife’s family reunions…After 29 yrs I still feel as if I’m a stranger in an even stranger land…

    December 5, 2010 at 10:45 am

    • .. a stranger peering into everyone :) thanks for your comment

      December 5, 2010 at 11:08 am

  5. your stuff is powerful.

    December 8, 2010 at 8:54 am

    • thank you, just passing the word along :) i will check out your stuff now. thanks so much for all your comments

      December 8, 2010 at 11:00 am

  6. I see the awards on sidebar…

    well done..

    visit all participants and get the most or perfect feedback if you wish…
    Happy Thursday!

    December 9, 2010 at 10:13 am

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