the air between
you
have no
idea what you
are doing to me now
inside… how you watch me
with your future eyes that penetrate
the air between us… i realize that i describe
a moment that hasn’t happened yet
but still, somehow i find
myself inside
you
..
© r.e.l. 12/8/10
Photo of the Helix Nebula
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this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 14 on Jingle Poetry
thanks so much to Jingle for this Stellar Blogger Award on Jingle Poetry
The imagery you associate with your poem reminds me of the idea that “we are all star stuff.” It is wonderfully put in this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XGK84Poeynk .
Thanks! And thanks for visiting the other day.
December 9, 2010 at 9:00 am
thank you for this video! yes, we are made of stars…
the imagery of being far away yet close is close to my heart.
December 9, 2010 at 9:14 am
Very fascinating and thought-provoking poem. Really enjoyed it.
Mine are here http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/hobbies-passions-pastimes-entertainment/ and http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/i-am/
December 12, 2010 at 7:15 pm
thank you.. yes, it’s a mystery
December 12, 2010 at 7:30 pm
beautiful piece.
elegant writing…
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December 12, 2010 at 7:36 pm
thank you
true feeling
December 12, 2010 at 7:45 pm
We are part of each other. And in special cases, when love enters in, we are more than we were. Thanks for sharing.
December 13, 2010 at 9:23 am
yes, when we connect, we become a part of each other.. thanks for visiting
December 13, 2010 at 10:44 am
Your writing takes my breath away.
December 13, 2010 at 6:31 pm
.. i am happy it touched you
December 13, 2010 at 8:40 pm