until i wake
you haunt me
surreal are
the images of you
in the mist
where time does not exist
you are a secret
which lies beneath the reason
i’m scared to tell
i am me now and everything in between
not the you i once was
still, i ask you
stay with me until i wake
© r.e.l. 12/15/10
photo ‘Autumn Walnut’ by cricketw
**this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 16 on Jingle Poetry
Im the mist where time does not exist.
It grabbed me!
http://timkeen40.wordpress.com
December 15, 2010 at 4:36 pm
me too
December 15, 2010 at 4:42 pm
the wonderful thing of loving
is getting to love
when you love
you love for ever
regardless what.
F.S.
December 15, 2010 at 5:21 pm
very true… it stays with you to see it in everything
December 15, 2010 at 5:23 pm
Secrets…
xoxoxox
December 16, 2010 at 12:11 am
always secrets. i’ll never tell ^^
December 16, 2010 at 9:51 am
nice write
December 16, 2010 at 4:56 am
thanks for stopping by
December 16, 2010 at 9:51 am
I totally enjoyed my visit here. Your site is beautiful, the collages, the offerings, thank you and happy rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
December 16, 2010 at 9:22 am
thank you… i try to make my whole site a work of art. glad you felt it..
December 16, 2010 at 9:57 am
I enjoyed my visit here, your writing is beautiful and your page is amazing!
Take care
Marinela x
December 17, 2010 at 7:04 am
thank you.. i try to make it a piece of art. i’m happy to meet you…
December 17, 2010 at 7:08 am
beautiful flow…
Happy New Year!
A++
December 27, 2010 at 8:39 am
thanks, i found this wonderful artwork which inspired the words. glad you feel it.
December 27, 2010 at 8:41 am
You are a secret which lies beneath the reason I’m scared to tell…mysterious and beautiful. Great poem.
December 27, 2010 at 8:12 pm
thank you… i enjoy the mystery…
December 27, 2010 at 8:33 pm
Beautiful and captivating, I am mesmerized
Oh and a side note, you are invited!
From 10:01 a.m. Monday December 27,2010 until 10:01 a.m. Saturday January 8, 2011 (CST), think about what you want to have, do and wish for this upcoming new year. After that, use them to create a poem, short fiction, prose, haiku or anything you can think of and link them in using the comment panel on this post:
http://riikainfinityy.com/2010/12/28/wishylissy-for-2011/
Share your dreams, wish list and wishes over here as the new year comes greeting on us!
Note that you don’t have to be a poet or blogger in order to do it but a link to where your work can be seen by other audiences. Do ask your friends to join in the fun as well!^_^
Cheers and have a wonderful year ahead=D
December 28, 2010 at 3:31 am
i’m glad.. i was too when i wrote it ….
thanks for the invite.. i’ll be thinking
happy holidays
December 28, 2010 at 6:56 am
Fantastic..
“stay with me until i wake..”
Loved it
December 29, 2010 at 1:54 am
the mystery…
December 29, 2010 at 7:33 am
thanks, barb (@SmoothSongsSoft) glad this was your favorite…
robin
May 28, 2011 at 9:40 am
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