he wants
he barely scratches the surface when he knows
that he wants her
to take something from him
just what… is elusive
but does it matter to you?
take the last bit
maybe more
it is the least i can offer
to you
for, in this moment
this unique instant…
my heart beats against the wind
© r.e.l. 12/24/10
inspired by D. H. Lawrence
**this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 16 on Jingle Poetry
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heart beats against the wind?
lovely line..
your work is very well fine tuned..
keep it up…
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December 25, 2010 at 3:53 pm
your support means the word too
i will be out there tomorrow…. for sure
December 25, 2010 at 10:39 pm
Thanks for linking,
well delivered emotions and messages…
lovely writing, keep it up.
A+
December 27, 2010 at 8:38 am
i will…..
hope you’re having a nice day
December 27, 2010 at 8:40 am
Another well phrased poem. Very enjoyable.
December 27, 2010 at 8:15 pm
glad you enjoyed…
December 27, 2010 at 8:35 pm
Great poem, really liked the following lines the most:
“for, in this moment
this unique instant…
my heart beats against the wind”
December 28, 2010 at 2:36 am
December 28, 2010 at 6:54 am