in the raindrops
you know
that you are
the light
that enters
my dark
the eclipse of you
a mystery
opening the door
to me
to my breath that lies floating now
exposed
lost in the raindrops of
knowing the cracks
in the spaces of us
tell a story we have yet to know
touched by the gap between inhaling and
remembering that you
do not leak out of my life
forever in a moment…
© r.e.l. 1/2/11
painting ‘Light Coming into the Cave’ by yvonca
**this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 17 Journey and The Road Ahead (1/9/11-1/15/11) on Jingle Poetry
Received Kreativ Blogger Award from Jingle Poetry
You do not leak out of my life…
ever…
always beautiful Robin
Thank you
FS
January 2, 2011 at 1:23 pm
January 2, 2011 at 1:32 pm
AWESOME RENDITION…feels like beautiful ying and yang at play. Thank you!
Happy Rally!
January 2, 2011 at 4:19 pm
dark and light… mystery and answer … close and far away.. thank you
January 2, 2011 at 4:38 pm
again, very beautiful
January 5, 2011 at 6:47 pm
thank you…
January 5, 2011 at 6:58 pm
Listening to the Foo Fighters featuring Norah Jones singing Virginia Moon. Perfect combination. I see your hands dance..
January 10, 2011 at 3:45 pm
i’ll have to find that song and listen… thanks for advice
January 10, 2011 at 4:12 pm
‘so you do not leak out of my life’
fantastic image–beautiful poem.
January 10, 2011 at 6:53 pm
thanks for visiting, heather. i was just re-reading your facebook poems. hilarious…
January 10, 2011 at 7:14 pm
superb entry.
love your supportive manner.
Happy Tuesday!
A+
January 10, 2011 at 8:13 pm
thanks… it’s my nature for my writing. supporting me supporting others..
January 10, 2011 at 8:21 pm
The cracks in the spaces, another wonderful line.
January 11, 2011 at 8:36 am
the cracks, the history, have a lot of power huh
January 11, 2011 at 9:23 am
A powerful poem. I really like it. thank you for sharing.
January 11, 2011 at 8:11 pm
you’re welcome.. thanks for visiting..
January 11, 2011 at 8:12 pm
this makes me think of my son first and foremost. that love. that unconditional and wonderful love. superb penning poet! Happy Potluck!
Kellie Elmore
January 12, 2011 at 10:41 am
thanks much
January 12, 2011 at 4:35 pm