you sparkle
with your gift
i slept next to you
last night
you are my wish, you know
and you are mine
where are you now
in this moment
stepping lightly
through misty time
with a fire not forgotten?
you say, don’t rush it
but stay on the edge:
your whisper…
to you i respond, i believe you
my secret:
your innuendo...
it’s time
to open the door
if ever so slightly
to me
i am here
and i knew you
before
i knew you were coming
© r.e.l. 1/28/11
image ‘Through My Window’ by Ron Moss
posted for Poetry Potluck week 20: Peace, Relaxation, Spirituality on Jingle Poetry
“i am here
and i knew you
before
i knew you were coming”
fantastic….
timeless 😉
I’m becoming a fan of urs.. 🙂
you are sweet..
Thank you….
“i am here
and i knew you
before
i knew you were coming”
ha! thats great, smart line…
thanks for stopping by… i like phrases that seem to twist time… 😉
Yeah, those last lines took my breath away. You sparkle with YOUR gift.
i knew before you said it 🙂
Your poetry and words are truly amazing. I am glad to have come across your blog through the potluck. I have subscribed and truly look forward to reading more.
glad my words have inspired you… enjoy 🙂
Sweet lines… I knew you before I knew you were coming… wow.
it’s true 😉
Yep, great finishing touch. Like it.
thanks… felt so right.
WOW! This one left shivers running down my spine as I read that last line. Very cleverly done, and a very brilliant piece of poetry! Really enjoyed this piece!
me too on the shivers… so that’s when i knew i had it right 🙂 thanks so much for your words… i really enjoy your writing too, so your words mean a lot
super sweet aND touching…
Thanks for sharing..
A+
thanks, jingle..
Magical words…well written
thank you… magic is my goal 😉
your poems are magical, sweet, gentle and dreamy.
sometimes we do have to open the door and let our loved one in.
thanks as usual trisha…
we always should… 😉
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