reason realized
i see you as i am inside
looking out
to feel
with your magical sight
positioning yourself
to give me eyes
but still i ask
who are you anyway?
i know what i know what i don’t have
do you?
you have spaces
that my spaces fit in always
leaving me speechless
you are precious and tough
i’m reaching for you
you are a smile that lasts from the first light
to the last dream of you
and for you…
to see you is to hear you
knowing this about me
ever-changing as you read
my mind
to bring me my finest moments
and so i speak to you
we are reason realized
my world inside
as my tiny roots blend with you
© r.e.l. 3/4/11
image “blumoon” by simeon schatz
posted for Thursday’s Poet Rally, week 39 (march 3-9)
thank you, Jingle, for the Perfect Poet Award
I accept… [For next week I nominate Loomings poetry ]
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That was absolutely beautiful.
http://timkeen40.wordpress.com
March 4, 2011 at 6:17 pm
thanks, tim.. i was happy too with the way it turned out
March 4, 2011 at 6:21 pm
Im used to your short pieces,
so this is a welcome treat.
Very lovely!
March 4, 2011 at 6:17 pm
sometimes i need more words …
thanks,evelyn
March 4, 2011 at 6:21 pm
This is a beautiful site, Robin! I’m building a site with iWeb, and I don’t see graphic options like you have. Can I ask how this site was developed?
Roger
March 4, 2011 at 6:39 pm
hi, thanks…i’ve worked hard on this
i emailed you with details about the blog development…
March 4, 2011 at 6:49 pm
Robin, these words are like a steady wind, blowing our of Presence back into Presence. It is a holy, holy work to make the Silence alive in Soul, to make the Divine close, intimate, beautiful with Love. You shine.
March 5, 2011 at 1:28 am
thanks blake always for your precious words…
March 5, 2011 at 8:40 am
Wonderful Rally contribution. Thank you!
Simeon, I do enjoy the unique lay-outs you create for your poetry. Nice!
Poem on …
March 5, 2011 at 4:41 am
thanks, jamie… and sim thanks you too.
March 5, 2011 at 8:51 am
beautiful!
March 5, 2011 at 5:38 am
much appreciated…
March 5, 2011 at 8:54 am
love it.
the way you look at life is wise..
Happy Rally.
March 5, 2011 at 6:03 am
there is wisdom all around us… thanks, jingle
March 5, 2011 at 9:00 am
Lovely presentation. I like the way you have the stanzas separated, and love the graphic.
March 5, 2011 at 6:40 am
thank you… on this one i felt like there needed to be a big breath or sigh in between stanzas… glad you liked it. and the graphic is taken by a magical photographer.. i will give him your comment
March 5, 2011 at 9:04 am
It was so pretty, I wanted to cry.
March 5, 2011 at 11:16 am
me too… that’s when i knew i had it right
thanks for your comments…
March 5, 2011 at 11:37 am
you win the perfect poet award, claim it in my blog,
thanks.
March 5, 2011 at 3:27 pm
thank you, jingle
i will accept it…
March 5, 2011 at 4:17 pm
Robin – I’m not typically a huge fan of poetry, but that was beautiful. Lots of heart there…
March 5, 2011 at 4:18 pm
thanks, roger.. that means a lot to me that i was able to get you to read through it. glad it was worth it
March 5, 2011 at 4:20 pm
please tell me a poet you wish to nominate for week 40.
Thanks.
March 5, 2011 at 5:54 pm
hi, i put the link here on this poem to the new poet i just found…
March 5, 2011 at 6:27 pm
Look inside and you understand what is outside.. simply lovely write
March 6, 2011 at 2:16 am
thanks
March 6, 2011 at 10:24 am
simply amazing robin. what a glorious expression of love.
March 7, 2011 at 6:51 am
thanks, trisha.. the words are flowing…..
March 7, 2011 at 7:29 am
Love personified…Nice.
March 9, 2011 at 3:33 am
special moments…
March 9, 2011 at 7:40 am
Very beautiful indeed..
Well writ My friend.. dreamy n so romantic..
Hugs xx
March 29, 2011 at 12:38 am
one of my favorites… it wrote itself. thanks for your comments
March 29, 2011 at 12:40 am
Lovely and deep
March 29, 2011 at 12:50 am
the reasons realized
March 29, 2011 at 1:49 am
Love it!
August 8, 2012 at 7:41 pm
thanks much, glad you enjoyed.. one of my older ones (i’m happy to be reminded).
August 8, 2012 at 9:16 pm
A spiritual dialogue, or contemplation. I love the imagery. This piece all comes together very well.
August 11, 2012 at 8:22 pm
both..
glad you enjoyed…
one of my favorites to write
August 11, 2012 at 8:31 pm
It’s no surprise that you would have enjoyed writing this, Robin. It comes through in the work.
August 11, 2012 at 8:35 pm