within cells behind parts
you brought me up
from the shadows
a mystery of parts
crying
a voice heard only
by the ground
healing
through air,
now whole…
balanced on me
to float
in your way you
could see what others did not
within the cells behind parts
how?
© r.e.l. 3/11/11
posted on Poetry Potluck-3/13-3/19/11 for Jingle Poetry
The dreamer within the dream,
the wide awake
beyond all we can dream,
the eyes of beauty
that roam through unseen beauty,
creating beauty
by seeing…
March 11, 2011 at 1:33 am
balancing out the shadows and light.. thanks, blake
March 11, 2011 at 7:06 am
got an award for you my friend.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/12/the-versatile-blogger-award-2/
March 11, 2011 at 10:53 am
Wow cool thank you! You are so sweet . I will promptly put it up on my site as soon as my new Mac is done loading
March 12, 2011 at 7:52 am
he saw you through the eyes of love-thats why he could see all of you.
March 12, 2011 at 5:59 am
Yes… Profoundly
March 12, 2011 at 7:51 am
my guess Is because of love. ? ? ?
I really it.
March 12, 2011 at 6:47 am
Love is magical…
March 12, 2011 at 7:56 am
that’s very lovely delivery of your message.
A++
March 13, 2011 at 7:42 pm
all about balance in life..
March 13, 2011 at 10:46 pm
oh my goodness.
this is amazing.
“a mystery of parts
crying”
thats my favorite line, but the whole poem is gorgeous.
March 14, 2011 at 5:34 pm
yes, i went inside on this one to describe it ….. glad it touched you
March 15, 2011 at 8:00 am