covers of me, of time
you complete me as you rise
to fill every gap
with each perfect
complement
knowing
you truly
to be full
of cells
immersed
in your deep
as the covers of me
of time
left
basking
purely invisible
© r.e.l. 3/31/11
image “mountaintree5″ by simsha
inspired by kundalini energy, induced by hatha yoga
posted for The Thursday Post on Ethereal Heights
Posted for Poetry Potluck 4/3-4/9/11 on Jingle Poetry
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stunning imagery.
A++
April 4, 2011 at 7:55 pm
thanks, jingle… for me too in my head
April 4, 2011 at 9:40 pm
ooo i loved the depth and flow!
April 4, 2011 at 9:36 pm
definite depth flowing ….
April 4, 2011 at 9:41 pm
I’m going to echo other commenters on the flow. The second line sets up the rhythm of “fill every gap” and then the words succeeding just pour down and in to do just that.
April 8, 2011 at 9:03 pm
i like that idea… of it pouring down like water. i wrote it about energy rising up.. i love when more than one meaning is conveyed
April 8, 2011 at 9:07 pm