butterfly
a
special
kind of
butterfly
in my
stomach
.
i adore
the way
you are
made of
stardust
as if gathered
together
for me
© r.e.l. 4/5/11
**featured in Love Bytes on redbubble
posted for Thursday Poets Rally 4/7-4/13/11 on Promising Poets
Ah… the pink voice of a butterfly in the center of our heart, our bones, shining… and we, made of stardust… can say it too. Amazing.
April 6, 2011 at 4:46 am
amazing….
April 6, 2011 at 7:50 am
Short and sweet…very nice
April 6, 2011 at 2:47 pm
thanks… (and also for the heads up on the link on the site).
April 6, 2011 at 3:02 pm
nice
April 6, 2011 at 3:19 pm
thanks, ewan… special to me
April 6, 2011 at 4:00 pm
How cool! I can feel it…
April 6, 2011 at 4:14 pm
awesome…
April 6, 2011 at 6:12 pm
special and cute.
love the purple color.
April 6, 2011 at 5:35 pm
my favorite color… couldn’t believe i found this image transparent…
April 6, 2011 at 6:14 pm
Stardust and butterflies make the world a more beautiful place. Well written.
April 6, 2011 at 6:00 pm
they sure do
April 6, 2011 at 6:14 pm
I think you should write greeting cards.
and I hope you dont take that as an insult.
Its just I cant shop for greeting cards ever because I end up crying in the aisle. And I swear, I have the same reaction reading your poems. I know its coming and BOOM!
right in the heart.
love love poems by you, my friend.
April 6, 2011 at 6:08 pm
how sweet of you… not that i want you to be sad, but i love to create emotion in my writings (and tears are cleansing
thanks for all your support….
April 6, 2011 at 6:16 pm
so simple yet so beautiful Robin…
April 7, 2011 at 12:25 am
the best words are simple…
April 7, 2011 at 6:44 am
magical
April 7, 2011 at 1:40 am
as butterflies and stars are…
April 7, 2011 at 6:45 am
as butterflies and stars are…
April 7, 2011 at 6:45 am
short, sweet.. what more can i say? beautiful! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/
April 7, 2011 at 7:48 am
thanks… and so are yours
April 7, 2011 at 7:52 am
Beautiful, the picture perfectly interacts with the poem…
April 7, 2011 at 10:11 am
i thought so too and was blown away by it…
April 7, 2011 at 12:59 pm
a butterfly in our stomach is hardly ever gathered for us, your verse left me thoughtful, Robin!
Rally Week 41 – My Poetry
April 7, 2011 at 11:33 am
it’s a wonderful feeling to describe.. butterflies are also free, and they have also been transformed
April 7, 2011 at 1:01 pm
This poem has a beautiful dreamlike quality, and also many readable layers which I love in so few words.
I love the last line, keep up the good work
April 7, 2011 at 1:55 pm
thanks … i will
April 7, 2011 at 8:50 pm
lovely, and i really like the title. it makes the poem.
April 8, 2011 at 9:37 am
awesome… i started with the idea of butterflies in my stomach and went from there…
April 8, 2011 at 4:59 pm
Lovely, the image, the words, the feeling …
April 8, 2011 at 12:29 pm
glad you enjoyed…
April 8, 2011 at 5:02 pm
I really loved this piece. It was simple, delicate and thought provoking. Much enjoyed ~ Rose
April 8, 2011 at 2:31 pm
sometimes the less the words, the better…
April 8, 2011 at 5:05 pm
Nicely done! Thank you …
April 8, 2011 at 2:59 pm
sure, any time… makes me happy to write it too
April 8, 2011 at 5:05 pm
this was a treat to my eyes
April 8, 2011 at 6:22 pm
i’m happy
April 8, 2011 at 7:35 pm
wow! The stardust makes me think of Peter Pan a little bit, which is one of my favorite stories. Captivating words.
April 8, 2011 at 8:37 pm
special magic in the stars…
April 8, 2011 at 9:01 pm
i’m post 40
but i have
to reply
i found you
through dan’s blog
glad i did
there’s magic
in ur words
& i need some
about right now
the spiritual
i need to
reconnect
i like ur site
an oasis
in cyberspace
i’ll stop by
from time to time
for a drink
may u always
walk
in the light
my sister
este
April 8, 2011 at 11:00 pm
wow, thanks for the amazing poem in response….
come back again…
i love magic.
April 9, 2011 at 7:26 am
i just read this reply again… what a sweet response. i hope you visit again as often as you like. it’s my pleasure to create an oasis in cyberspace..
September 5, 2011 at 7:20 am
Simple and nicely done!
April 8, 2011 at 11:42 pm
thank you… simple floating words..
April 9, 2011 at 7:27 am
so lovely
April 9, 2011 at 4:24 am
April 9, 2011 at 7:27 am
Wonderful poem.
April 9, 2011 at 4:31 pm
thanks as usual
April 9, 2011 at 5:26 pm
Just just just lovely!
I am from ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/04/02/the-alliterated-odes-the-alliterated-symphonies-of-the-mind/
April 10, 2011 at 3:58 am
thanks, butterflies always are
April 10, 2011 at 12:02 pm
A beautiful little poem!
April 10, 2011 at 8:09 am
thank you.. short and simple
April 10, 2011 at 12:07 pm
Bravo.
April 11, 2011 at 4:01 pm
thanks much
April 11, 2011 at 5:34 pm
Beautiful! You have a beautiful blog
April 13, 2011 at 11:38 am
thank you, april.. .much appreciated. come again
April 13, 2011 at 12:16 pm
I love the feeling we describe as buttflies, esp the way you put it
April 13, 2011 at 12:08 pm
thank you… it is a special feeling…
April 13, 2011 at 12:17 pm
Umm, are you raelly just giving this info out for nothing?
September 8, 2011 at 12:09 pm
yes
but if you prefer a greeting card or coffee table book, purchase here http://www.redbubble.com/people/secretinnuendo
September 10, 2011 at 11:36 am
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