the fire in you
how is the fire in you
the fire in me
at times when i least
expect it to be?
you lead
i follow
when your steam, your inferno
catches me…
in a moment i blaze…
and you know the truth
whether you
created your moment
for me or not
© r.e.l. 5/9/11
image by simsha
Featured in All Out Emotion on redbubble
Posted on Poetry Potluck 5/22-5/28/11 on Jingle Poetry
Quiet in all its passion. Brings out the mystery that intensifies it all.Beautifully put!
May 10, 2011 at 12:18 am
there is a lot in the mystery, yes.. thanks for your comments
May 10, 2011 at 6:04 am
these beautiful mysteries make life worth living.
fabulous poem robin. your poems are magic.
May 11, 2011 at 12:56 am
i agree… these moments are all what life is about
May 11, 2011 at 6:42 am
Added, I enjoy your site!
May 19, 2011 at 12:43 pm
A magical poem.
May 22, 2011 at 6:39 pm
thank you… no matter what fire stands for, it has a beauty to it.. glad you enjoyed
May 22, 2011 at 9:02 pm
Good work.
May 22, 2011 at 7:16 pm
i love this one too… writing it made me feel better
May 22, 2011 at 9:03 pm
Inner fire is contagious! Yes – it was quite mysterious too! Here is mine: http://jaanpehchaan.wordpress.com/2011/05/22/no-pain-no-gain/
May 22, 2011 at 8:49 pm
it spreads like wild fire
May 22, 2011 at 9:03 pm
your words are powerful,
very enlightening piece.
May 22, 2011 at 9:16 pm
fire is powerful… thanks for visiting
May 22, 2011 at 9:18 pm
You are really good at projecting emotion through your poetry, lovely
May 22, 2011 at 11:01 pm
thank you.. the elements speak
May 23, 2011 at 6:20 am
Stellar yet in an earthen tone – fantastic write!
May 23, 2011 at 6:52 am
thanks… love your comment
May 23, 2011 at 11:07 am
And the fire burns bright. Loved your write!
May 23, 2011 at 3:57 pm
glad you did. thanks for visiting
May 23, 2011 at 4:40 pm
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