. . . . . . . did you know that i sit next to you now in the tiniest house of time?

practice

i like the way
you float in my mind

don’t move
while i practice my whisper

© r.e.l. 8/7/11

image by simsha

Posted to Poetry Potluck 8/7-8/13/11 on Jingle Poetry

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18 Responses

  1. always; perfection
    always; at the perfect time;
    tonight, my quiet time
    and your dreams
    my dear robin
    good night…

    August 8, 2011 at 12:12 am

    • always a pleasure to hear from you.. got your email and would love to help with your latest blog issue and of course I look forward to your paintings…;)

      August 8, 2011 at 12:30 am

  2. Very nice. It seems to glide past and ightly touch the reader.

    August 8, 2011 at 4:01 am

    • awesome… glad to hear it…

      August 18, 2011 at 8:12 am

  3. Getting it Just right is important.

    August 9, 2011 at 7:00 am

    • agreed ;)

      August 9, 2011 at 7:39 am

  4. brilliant.

    August 9, 2011 at 9:38 am

    • a fine moment..

      August 9, 2011 at 9:52 am

  5. Beautiful… first time here looking forward tro the next

    August 12, 2011 at 8:24 pm

    • thanks.. Looking forward to yours too ..

      August 12, 2011 at 8:33 pm

  6. beautiful- just lovely robin.

    August 15, 2011 at 8:56 am

    • thanks for all your support on my poetry … ;)

      August 15, 2011 at 11:11 am

    • Full of salient points. Don’t stop believing or witrnig!

      September 8, 2011 at 7:13 pm

      • never ;)

        September 10, 2011 at 11:33 am

  7. fantabulous.

    August 17, 2011 at 1:48 am

    • thank you.. i was in the mood for something simplistic

      August 18, 2011 at 8:13 am

  8. Wow, that’s a relaly clever way of thinking about it!

    September 8, 2011 at 9:57 pm

    • right on

      September 10, 2011 at 11:34 am

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