. . . . . . . did you know that i sit next to you now in the tiniest house of time?

through a mystery

what do you think of
when you fall, slowly through a mystery

looking through
the eyes
of me?

© r.e.l. 8/20/11

image by  s i m s h a

Posted for Poetry Picnic 8/21-8/27/11 on Gooseberry Garden

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8 Responses

  1. Short… and perfect. I like this very much!

    August 21, 2011 at 6:35 pm

    • thx, a perfect mystery ;)

      August 21, 2011 at 6:37 pm

  2. scared of course :) lol
    Mystery scares me, keeps me off kilter :(
    I like the piece though, here’s mine: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/vanished/

    August 21, 2011 at 7:04 pm

    • i love the mystery… it’s empowering to me

      August 21, 2011 at 7:05 pm

  3. kez

    love this short ,succinct yet inspiring thought …thank you

    August 22, 2011 at 3:44 am

    • thanks… it is inspiring to me too to move into a mystery. and what better than through the eyes of someone else so that you have a friend ;)

      August 22, 2011 at 11:15 am

  4. shail

    That’s one question one would like an answer to :)

    August 23, 2011 at 1:47 am

  5. life is a problem which never has an anwser…….

    September 26, 2011 at 11:14 pm

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