then pause
you
feel trapped
inside the cells of
secrets known
=
it’s simple though
out here
=
so, shhh
listen for my pause
[...]
and you’ll see
the way
© r.e.l. 8/30/11
image nightleaf
Posted to Poetry Picnic 9/4-9/10/11 on Gooseberry Garden
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I love this!!!!! [...] shh… The pause!!!! Love love that
August 31, 2011 at 8:55 pm
thanks, me too, i just said “shh…” to myself
August 31, 2011 at 9:03 pm
Nice Post!
September 2, 2011 at 7:46 am
thanks, visit again soon
September 2, 2011 at 9:15 am
beautiful robin.
September 3, 2011 at 10:17 am
that you.. [...]
September 3, 2011 at 7:37 pm
It reads like a call to silence of the mind, peace, somehow…maybe I am wrong.
Happy garden day! http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/as-it-was/
September 4, 2011 at 6:17 pm
yes, peace of mind and calming all the chaos that creates trauma inside. all the answers are inside if you just take the chance to listen.
September 4, 2011 at 8:06 pm
very apt words.
September 4, 2011 at 7:30 pm
thanks,
September 4, 2011 at 8:08 pm
shh- thats nicely placed! here’s my entry: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/a-roar-to-mankind/
September 4, 2011 at 11:29 pm
thanks, i think that’s my favorite part of the poem too…
September 5, 2011 at 7:12 am
So wonderful I love your poem
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/
September 5, 2011 at 12:00 am
thank you, me too. i’m listening to it right now
September 5, 2011 at 7:14 am
Wonderful writing. Yes: listen to my pause — a great line!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/blood-on-the-moon-2/
September 5, 2011 at 3:08 am
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September 5, 2011 at 7:16 am
Well done, Robin! Loved it. Blessings, Terri
September 5, 2011 at 9:58 am
thx
September 5, 2011 at 7:01 pm
Great Work of Creativity!
September 5, 2011 at 11:38 pm
thanks, i appreciate your comments…
September 7, 2011 at 8:12 am
Secrets in the moments of silence.
Nice work! … Appreciate the sentiment.
September 6, 2011 at 7:15 pm
definitely.. you can only hear them in silence
September 7, 2011 at 8:12 am
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