. . . . . . . did you know that i sit next to you now in the tiniest house of time?

i just whispered

it’s true,
i don’t know you.

but do you know
that i just whispered
y o u  a r e 
b e a u t i f u l

© r.e.l. 9/21/11

Image by Taryn Varnes

Posted for Poetry Picnic 9/25-10/1/11 on Gooseberry Garden

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12 Responses

  1. I don’t know you, but please allow my smile to let you know I appreciate you.

    September 23, 2011 at 10:51 am

    • you just made my morning with that comment.. Thank you :)

      September 23, 2011 at 10:58 am

  2. Kay Salady

    Extremely meaningful poetry dear Robin. Thank you!

    September 26, 2011 at 1:57 am

    • so glad you enjoy

      September 26, 2011 at 6:32 am

  3. great even the poem is short meaning is wonderful and the way you expressed it

    September 26, 2011 at 11:09 pm

  4. cool one.

    saying positive things to a stranger is something hard to do but we need at times.

    September 27, 2011 at 11:09 am

  5. There is a lot of beauty in this world, but so few perfections. This… is perfect. You have created a beautiful thing with your words, and they, and I, are grateful for the life you have given them.

    October 8, 2011 at 9:07 pm

    • so sweet to get this comment just as i put my thoughts together with some more inspiring thoughts… thanks for making my night

      October 8, 2011 at 9:28 pm

  6. Posts like this bihrgetn up my day. Thanks for taking the time.

    October 11, 2011 at 4:42 am

    • awesome

      October 12, 2011 at 8:47 pm

  7. yes i did. thanks for the compliment. so are you. :)

    sweet and beautiful poem robin.

    October 12, 2011 at 1:17 am

    • ;)

      October 12, 2011 at 8:47 pm

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