as crazy as you
imagine me
as crazy as you
in your forest
that smiles with your sound
i see you
don’t go
touch me again
in only a second
…i knew you
© r.e.l. 10/23/11
image by s i m s h a
Posted for Poetry Picnic 10/23-10/30/11 on Gooseberry Garden
Simple, complex – enchanting poem
October 23, 2011 at 11:59 pm
thank you much
October 24, 2011 at 11:33 am
Lovely, and sad. Well written!
October 24, 2011 at 5:43 am
not sad for me but i know that each reader has his or her own feeling in any poem. it’s ok to express sadness anyway (or craziness
October 24, 2011 at 11:33 am
I can relate to the sentiment in this. A wonderful feeling, well expressed!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/23/the-wolf-and-the-rose/
October 24, 2011 at 6:32 am
thank you… i’m happy how it turned out too…
October 24, 2011 at 11:32 am
amazing one,
October 24, 2011 at 11:31 am
thanks glad you are feeling crazy now
October 24, 2011 at 11:32 am
Simply deep and deeply simple. I love it! xoXox
October 25, 2011 at 7:04 am
yes
October 28, 2011 at 6:12 pm
in only a second, I know you?
smiles, a cool read.
October 26, 2011 at 11:40 am
glad you enjoyed
October 26, 2011 at 4:12 pm
glad you enjoyed… yes, only a second
October 28, 2011 at 6:12 pm
amazing in only a second you know me that is really amazing and well done
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/25/changing-lands/
October 26, 2011 at 10:22 pm
October 28, 2011 at 6:12 pm
So much can happen in a second, great write
November 2, 2011 at 1:59 pm
it sure can…
November 2, 2011 at 3:55 pm