float away from seeing
when i cannot
put a word
to it…
when i know it is
creeping
along inside its own
skin
when you have no idea
and float away from seeing
its polar opposite
in you
for me
© r.e.l. 7/30/11
image by simeon schatz
Posted for Poetry Potluck 7/31-8/6/11 on Jingle Poetry
i just loved you use d your words so you were not sure until the end.. then you go. oh yeah! perfect.
August 1, 2011 at 4:33 am
i just loved you use d your words so you were not sure until the end.. then you go. oh yeah! perfect.
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/2011/07/30/she/
August 1, 2011 at 4:34 am
thanks, luna
August 1, 2011 at 5:52 pm
Sweet… fits the picture well.
August 1, 2011 at 5:03 am
thanks, i agree..
August 1, 2011 at 5:52 pm
Picture perfect writing. Nice!
August 2, 2011 at 3:26 am
thanks.. the moments create these words, not me
August 2, 2011 at 8:24 am
your words make it float away indeed.
well done.
August 2, 2011 at 6:07 pm
my intention… glad it worked for you
August 3, 2011 at 11:09 am
beautifully expressed.
August 15, 2011 at 8:57 am
powerful moment.. thanks for your comment
August 15, 2011 at 11:11 am
Emotive, turns me over inside
November 13, 2011 at 1:55 pm
wow, thanks for those thoughts…
November 13, 2011 at 2:06 pm
aptly put.
November 13, 2011 at 4:34 pm
thx one of my favorites
November 13, 2011 at 7:07 pm
I had to read this a few times… there’s something very moving about these words.
November 15, 2011 at 11:37 am
i’m happy you enjoyed. i like to re-read it from time to time too…
November 17, 2011 at 7:46 pm
very profound piece.
love the imagery.
November 15, 2011 at 12:23 pm
the more profound the better…
November 17, 2011 at 7:47 pm