. . . . . . . did you know that i sit next to you now in the tiniest house of time?

it is

floating…

yes, on me.

what?
you see me now
under waves of light?
how?
i thought it was dark

it is.

© r.e.l. 11/5/11

image by  s i m s h a

Posted for Poetry Picnic 11/6-11/13/11 on Gooseberry Garden

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11 Responses

  1. thanks, @Xgratia, for including my poem in your Xtra newsletter on twitter today. thanks for passing the word and glad you enjoyed…

    November 6, 2011 at 12:28 am

  2. amazing verses Robin :) i love you theme poem as well.

    November 7, 2011 at 12:29 am

    • thank you… glad you enjoy.
      (and yes i agree on theme..
      Modularity Lite wordpress theme).

      November 7, 2011 at 9:11 am

  3. love your verse as always,

    a fantastic piece with wonders.

    November 7, 2011 at 8:36 am

    • i appreciate all of your support… ;)

      November 7, 2011 at 9:12 am

  4. I love the brevity and the sarcastic tone. Right up my street. Well penned wit:)

    November 7, 2011 at 6:27 pm

    • glad you saw the humor ;)

      November 7, 2011 at 6:33 pm

  5. thought provoking :)
    enjoy the gooseberry day!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/07/there-to-stay/

    November 7, 2011 at 6:37 pm

    • definitely..

      November 7, 2011 at 8:22 pm

  6. amazing one.
    :)

    November 10, 2011 at 10:00 am

  7. thanks, @PoetryArts, for the mention on your Twitter newsletter Poetry Love Arts … glad you enjoyed ;)

    November 12, 2011 at 11:17 am

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