. . . . . . . did you know that i sit next to you now in the tiniest house of time?

of all that whispers

swirls of life
judgments
and tears
we move past it…

as our hearts dig deep
to the soul
of all that whispers,
we know
without question
that which tells a story
in the spaces of us
and that which lives
forever in a moment

© r.e.l. 11/24/11

image by simeon schatz

Posted for Poetry Picnic 11/27-12/3/11 on Goosberry Garden

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24 Responses

  1. Beautiful scenery and thoughtful words :)

    November 24, 2011 at 10:13 pm

    • thx you.. glad you stopped by

      November 24, 2011 at 10:15 pm

  2. Such a beautiful poem, Robin. I love your words and all they point towards.

    November 25, 2011 at 2:23 am

    • so nice to hear from you again, blake. thanks for your kind words…

      November 25, 2011 at 10:56 am

  3. I really appreciate what you post. You have a new subscriber now.

    November 26, 2011 at 12:53 pm

  4. Wonderful writing. So vivid and true!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/27/those-times-ago/

    November 28, 2011 at 7:30 am

    • glad it rings true for you too…

      November 28, 2011 at 8:57 am

  5. amazing imagery, :)

    November 28, 2011 at 9:38 am

    • much appreciated :)

      November 28, 2011 at 8:58 pm

  6. a moment is all it takes but means so much!!! :)
    my entry: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/28/as-one/

    November 28, 2011 at 5:29 pm

    • moments can last forever

      November 28, 2011 at 8:59 pm

  7. mmm, strong and deep poem, with a valuable message.

    …and…..it is well written and formed.

    November 28, 2011 at 6:19 pm

    • glad the message helped

      November 28, 2011 at 8:59 pm

  8. Beautiful, thought provoking and delicate. Love it!

    November 29, 2011 at 12:54 am

    • thx for visiting…

      November 29, 2011 at 8:30 am

  9. amazing photograph. the poem and photograph both have a very soothing effect on the heart.

    December 6, 2011 at 3:43 am

    • thanks, i wrote this in the middle of a chaotic thanksgiving celebration moment (snuck away :) and the photographs by simeon schatz never stop amazing me… glad you enjoy

      December 7, 2011 at 10:32 am

  10. Great Blog post. I am going to bookmark and read more often. I love the Blog template

    December 10, 2011 at 4:09 pm

  11. Yes, I believe that–beautifully put.

    December 17, 2011 at 5:16 pm

    • thank you.. glad you stopped by

      December 17, 2011 at 6:44 pm

  12. loved the whirling imagery,

    Greetings:

    Hope that you have had a great Merry Christmas.

    Thanks for the delightful support along the way,

    Happy New Year.

    Share a piece of your poetry today at our poetry party today if you could.,

    Have fun!

    Sending you love and blessings.
    Cheers.

    xoxox

    hope all is well, smiles.

    December 26, 2011 at 9:22 pm

    • thanks and to you too, happy holidays… i’m sharing away as usual. ;)

      December 28, 2011 at 4:08 pm

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  14. It was wonderful to study using your publish. I actually enjoyed the couple of minutes which i put in studying it and wished to leave a comment to express that….Best wishes

    April 26, 2012 at 6:54 pm

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