and then…
and then
it’s you, as you pass by…
in your hair
i’m not sure
but i think i see
an object of you
reflecting
burning your light
in the water…
© r.e.l. 12/27/11
image by simeon schatz
posted for Thursday Poet Rally 12/28/11-1/4/12 on The Poetry Palace
A subtle image, yet an immediate one. I’ve been thinking a bit about the Imagist poets lately and so I look for things that are being clearly defined.
I’ve been looking at your profile – Iive on the other side of the world just about; I find yoga difficult but know the worth of meditation.
Go well.
December 28, 2011 at 1:23 pm
it’s all about meditation (hatha yoga as well–meditation in motion). glad you enjoy my blog.. see you again i hope
December 28, 2011 at 4:09 pm
I loved this fron start to finish – excellent piece of writing
http://jobryantnz.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/x-is-for-xanthippe/
December 28, 2011 at 1:25 pm
much appreciated…
December 28, 2011 at 4:09 pm
nice imagery, light in water
happy rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/souls-paradise/
December 28, 2011 at 3:52 pm
i love it too… water and fire
December 28, 2011 at 4:10 pm
love the reflection, well done.
December 28, 2011 at 4:03 pm
reflections are my favorite
December 28, 2011 at 4:10 pm
goodness! these few lines brought such passion and emotion for me! lovely!
~L
http://untitledmoments.com/2011/12/23/i-am-many-free-write-friday/
December 28, 2011 at 6:04 pm
i’m so happy about that
December 28, 2011 at 7:37 pm
Calming piece, enjoyed it. Happy New Year!
December 28, 2011 at 7:13 pm
you too, and yes it brings me peace too. glad you enjoyed
December 28, 2011 at 7:37 pm
Love that last line. Reflecting…burning–beautifully contemplative.
December 28, 2011 at 9:20 pm
December 28, 2011 at 9:22 pm
Contemplating as we reflect … very nice.
Happy Rally …
Isadora
http:// insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/i-was-the-child/
December 30, 2011 at 10:58 am
always …
January 2, 2012 at 2:33 am
I have to say that of the fifteen poems that I read before yours from the poetry palace yours is my favorite…simple, clean, and thought provoking. thank you for sharing! I think I’ll follow your site, come say hi some time…
Wander
December 31, 2011 at 10:17 am
wow what an honor.. thanks for your comment. I’m off to visit your site now. see you again soon
January 2, 2012 at 2:34 am
Oh, I like this. So sudden in the start, so reflective at the end.
January 4, 2012 at 3:59 am
i like that part too. thanks for commenting..
came to me so suddenly
January 11, 2012 at 6:41 am