with a secret
before you knew me
i felt you …
knowing me,
piercing me
to the core
with a secret
unspoken
let me know when
you’re ready
to do it again
remember, i’m your innuendo
© r.e.l. 5/5/12
image by simeon schatz
Posted for Poetry Picnic 5/6-5/13/12 on Gooseberry Garden
oooh interesting…. well crafted. I particularly liked the opening lines.
May 6, 2012 at 10:34 pm
thanks for visiting..
May 7, 2012 at 10:55 am
That is quite powerful! Like it.,
May 7, 2012 at 12:22 am
Great write…
May 8, 2012 at 8:54 am
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May 8, 2012 at 9:06 am