just now
i transmitted
my thoughts to you
just now …
eyes at sunset
never stop penetrating
the everlasting moment …
just bow your head and be silent
© r.e.l. 5/19/12
Posted for Poetry Picnic 5/20-5/27/12
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I like this poem very much!
Expecially the last line…although On the first read the meaning of it was way different than on the second
Wander
May 20, 2012 at 8:40 am
glad to hear… each reading can be different
May 20, 2012 at 8:49 am
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RT @wisdombyrobin: just now wp.me/pVkY5-SO #poetry #micropoetry #poem
+++ I bow in silence… > a beauty, Robin
May 20, 2012 at 9:42 am
thanks, @boutman. i bow too.
May 20, 2012 at 9:42 am
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Sybille Sterkabout 5 hours ago
Lovely.
May 20, 2012 at 3:48 pm
– robinellenlucas
May 20, 2012 at 3:53 pm
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kappisanabout 5 hours ago
Love it!:D
May 20, 2012 at 3:49 pm
thanks for your support…
– robinellenlucas
May 20, 2012 at 3:52 pm
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Paul Hicksonabout 3 hours ago
aww beautiful piece!
May 20, 2012 at 3:50 pm
thank you, i wrote it just now
– robinellenlucas
May 20, 2012 at 3:53 pm
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kenroomeabout 1 hour ago
Your poems are as prayers that clear the way into beauty.
May 20, 2012 at 3:50 pm
– robinellenlucas
May 20, 2012 at 3:51 pm
Very well expressed. Like the ending.
May 21, 2012 at 5:58 am
thanks, me too ….
May 21, 2012 at 7:21 am
beautiful …close intimate relationships seem to exude this …thank you for sharing
May 21, 2012 at 7:20 am
you’re welcome…
May 21, 2012 at 7:20 am
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sure2010about 11 hours ago
great communication to reach instant
May 26, 2012 at 8:45 am
yes it only takes an instant
May 26, 2012 at 8:45 am
thanks @ThePoetryTree for the feature in your newsletter The HUSH! is out! http://bit.ly/s6hbXU
May 26, 2012 at 11:59 am
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TheWanderingBoo2 days ago
beautiful
June 20, 2012 at 9:44 am