what would you write
what would you write to me if you could?
would you say what you feel,
what is real?
would the world spin
to a place
it hasn’t been
for you
for me
so we can understand…
what would you write?
tell me
© r.e.l. 10/3/12
posted for Thursday Poets Rally week 76 10/31/12-11/7/12 on Hyde Park
I would say…
I don’t know
over and over again
that this is the most honest position
I keep finding myself in
I don’t know
But I love
And I try to find all the places
where love is absent within myself
I try to find and remove these barriers
I fail often
but yet, I try
this is what i would say
October 4, 2012 at 10:12 pm
your honesty is great… nice to see.
you are an inspiration
October 5, 2012 at 7:47 pm
I would probably write a poem that goes something like this:
…
As you can see it’s blank verse, a bit like me.
October 7, 2012 at 1:51 pm
there are many words in those three dots
October 7, 2012 at 2:10 pm
Indeed there are.
October 7, 2012 at 2:10 pm
Thanks, Bradley Howington @YourPoetryRT, for passing my poem around… Much appreciated.
October 14, 2012 at 10:18 am
lovely wonders….
keep thinking of positive thoughts.
November 1, 2012 at 10:25 am
thanks for your words..
November 1, 2012 at 10:31 am