i could see the sparkle
in your eye turn into a tear..
a river of sadness…
in that moment
i knew you loved me
© r.e.l. 12/12/10
posted for Poetry Potluck 6/12-6/17/11 for Jingle Poetry
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You said it all in just a few lines. Nicely done, Robin.
..and the photo helps. thanks for visiting
Wow, very succinct and very powerful.
it was a powerful moment that created these words..
The moment of true love is always just that powerful.
Well said.
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ah yes, a river of sadness, or is it an ocean?
well said.
pure and true, huh… yes, sometimes an ocean. but it only takes one drop
Short, and full of truth. Very nice.
I read some of your past poetry. You are talented. I enjoyed it very much.
thank you for your support 🙂 just letting the flood gates open 🙂
powerful one.
well done.
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thank you… was a powerful little moment back then when i wrote it
Beautiful…. And so is the picture! 🙂
the picture brought up a vivid emotion, yes.
Beautiful and powerful poem loved it!
sometimes less words the better, thank you
I LOVE this! Beautiful in all its economy.This is what I call perfection 🙂
how sweet of you… the moment was (yes)
Crisp short and sweet lines ( filling up heaviness of heart ) Thanks for share…
yea a descriptive feeling….