fire
me up
with your
sun
and your
soul..
like
the way
i sometimes
feel
the flame
pierce the
shield
i keep
around me
it feels good
to know you
do it
again
…
© r.e.l. 4/17/11
image “red sun”
**featured in All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical on redbubble
posted to Luna’s World week 3
posted for Poetry Potluck 4/17-4/23/11 on Jingle Poetry
my secret innuendo® 
Different!
smooth flow.
love this…
i’m proud of this vibrant look for the red sunflowers 🙂 thanks for visiting…
Another beautiful piece, side by side.
the flowers steal the show 😉
hmmmmmmm naughty me 😦
uhm! yes flowers are nice and the words!!! uhm
GREAT WORK! 🙂
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/17/when-the-fairy-touched-me/
glad you enjoy..
Bravo! And what a divine presentation. Wonderful! Big smiles here.
thanks, i’m a big fan of the flowers myself so wanted them to overshadow the words…
The way the flame pierces the shield, Your words have a flow that capture my imagination. The flowers are the icing. simply beautiful.
i couldn’t resist with these red flowers 🙂 they are firey, huh …
* divine * red red red.. * divine * here is mine, ~ these are few of my favorite things ~
Someone is Special
thank you… red has it’s place at times… (not always for me… i have to be in the mood 😉
Your metaphoric poetry is scintillating!
the flowers spoke to me
Let your muse speak about flowers, trails,or anything. All your poems are beautiful!
thank you, dan… i like my muse 🙂
Quite different and uniquely put together, great stuff. 🙂
thanks… i myself love that the flowers take over
just loved it. sometimes we all need that touch that pierces through our shield to touch our heart.
yes, and it’s firey 😉