i don’t know how
you do what you do
but you do it
every time
to me
a never-ending
way of being
dear mountain stream,
speak to me
as loud as you wish
© r.e.l. 8/20/11
image by s i m s h a
Posted for Poetry Picnic 8/21-8/27/11 on Gooseberry Garden
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I live in the mountains of Colorado and understand your spiritual connection with the stream. Thank you for sharing it.
you’re welcome… this photo is taken in a special garden by simeon schatz, either cold fog or warm steam always.. glad you enjoyed.
I am a water rat, and this picture speaks to me, as you nicely stated in this one 🙂
here’s mine: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/19/fragment-of-yesteryear/
it’s a special waterfall true to my heart… spoke to me too 😉
love the setting, beautiful enjoyment.
moment captured well in the photo.. 😉
I wanted it to say “as loudly as you wish” – but aside from that, I thought this was beautiful. Great depth of feeling in a few words!!
thanks 😉
p.s. normal grammar rules do not hold true in my poems 🙂
brilliant, keep shining.
🙂
Happy Poetry Picnic!
thank you… through this sparkling water, i’m shining 😉
I love this. I can just hear the water and feel the spray. Thank you! 🙂
me too 😉
In love with this! Beautiful! The pic is amazing too! Happy Rally!
much appreciated..
thanks @YourPoetryRT for passing this one along on twitter in your newsletter. much appreciated!
very lovely.
thank you… see you again soon..
Holy shziint, this is so cool thank you.
you’re welcome. i agree, especially the photo
Thanks for sharing. What a plaeusre to read!
you’re welcome 🙂
Awesome blog, it’s just like a game for me! It’s so infomative and usefull, thanks a lot! If you post more of this great stuff, I’ll visit your blog again!
awesome
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