a deeper order

create me like i created you
in the space
which lies deeper than you know

it is where, you see,
i first found
the concept of your
to think outside your unexpected life
and roar instead

i sighed

© r.e.l. 5/18/11

Posted on Thursday Poet’s Rally 5/19-5/25/11 on Promising Poets

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52 thoughts on “a deeper order

  1. I love the photo. I didn’t see the lion at first. It was only on second studying that it came into view.

    Beautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing.

    • glad you can relate.. my goal is just to write with mystery and no rules so that the words have different meaning to each

    • It’s funny, I was thinking of a male lion as I wrote but knew I needed a female lion photo. a mixture of the feminine and masculine

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