why
you know
is because it
is your way to find
me where i am… where
the edge meets the whisper
that washes away the sands of
surrender, to touch me with patience
© r.e.l. 5/30/11
image of me by simsha
posted on Poetry Potluck 5/29-6/4/11 on Jingle Poetry
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Robin, thanks for visiting my site. I’m glad you included your site’s address in the comment. You have a very nice site here. i really enjoy the images to go along with the words. This poem Why is really nice. Brevity with not only a mental image but also the staircase picture created by your words. Also thought the lack of punctuation was a great idea here. This piece can be read in a few manners, dependent on how the reader pauses- Why, Why you Know- Nicely done:)
thanks for noticing the beauty in words and thoughts without conventional punctuation and controlled pause. I like to create ambiguity
Always the first one in bringing
a smile to my mornings
dear Robin
Thank you
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you’re welcome, Franco… and I look forward to getting your artwork 🙂
very nicely penned!
thanks for visiting… straight from the heart.
I like this poem very much…I look forward to reading more.
there’s always more 🙂 thanks for visiting….
Quite an excellent poetry dear….superb….
thanks much , see you again i’m sure
I would love to hear the story behind this. Really enjoyed it, thanks 🙂
a simple feeling of understanding… which isn’t so common 😉
very nicely written, lovely form
thanks, i love it too. come again..
totally dug, dig this 🙂
enjoy the potluck!
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thanks. you too
love the shape,
creative work.
🙂
me too
Lovely poem and stunning photo. Beautiful
what a fulfilling relationship.
yes… to find comfort, understanding and patience.