there’s a forever
in there somewhere amongst you
behind your eyelids
© r.e.l. 6/2/11
[haiku for you]
image by simsha
posted for Thursday Poet’s Rally 6/2-6/9/11 on Promising Poets
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tq for coming by my blog my friend.. am on sabbatical for awhile and have fun with potluck and thursday rally.. this is really a great haiku i am reading!
looking forward to your return… have a good one. always a huge compliment coming from you ..
Lovely poem and gorgeous picture
Thank you .. And yes the photographer has talent
superb ..
cute Haiku, Thanks for the contribution.
🙂
no problem… i hadn’t even intended to write a haiku. it just came out 😉
I sense something deep behind the words.
But unfortunately you’ve lost me. What’s the ‘forever’ behind the eyelids and the significance of the tree in relation to your prose?
Appreciate your sharing of thoughts.
Thanks!
about closing your eyes and feeling like you can see forever in there.. the tree symbolizes a vision in this place..
[but it’s whatever you want it to mean. everything i write has multiple meanings to whoever reads it].
Thanks for your thoughts. I closed my eyes immediately. I havent seen forever – yet.
Somehow I always felt forever is if you feel trully happiness, isnt it?
definitely 🙂
I really really like that. I am a bit taken with the idea of forever at the moment, and that really spoke to me. Thanks!
cool… you can “see forever” with your eyes closed… another take on it.. when your eyes are closed you can see so much more than when opened. have a nice day
Very sweet and deep. With my eyelids close I can see colors and movement, but for forever? I wonder, and thank you for sharing. 🙂
yes, the distance of forever… you can see that far 😉
Very beautiful and powerful words, gives one the feeling of forever. Very well written!
thanks… always love your comments. fyi that i voted for you for next week as part of my Perfect Poet award this past week 😉
Everything works here wonderfully. Profound words blended with a beautiful image. Excellent:)
thanks… yes, there is a whole world behind your eyelids if you let yourself see it
lovely. just loved it.
unimaginable how far you can see in there, huh