it’s you, as you pass by…
in your hair
i’m not sure
but i think i see
an object of you
burning your light
in the water…
© r.e.l. 12/27/11
posted on Micropoetry Society
posted for Thursday Poet Rally 12/28/11-1/4/12 on The Poetry Palace
20 thoughts on “and then…”
A subtle image, yet an immediate one. I’ve been thinking a bit about the Imagist poets lately and so I look for things that are being clearly defined.
I’ve been looking at your profile – Iive on the other side of the world just about; I find yoga difficult but know the worth of meditation.
it’s all about meditation (hatha yoga as well–meditation in motion). glad you enjoy my blog.. see you again i hope
I loved this fron start to finish – excellent piece of writing
nice imagery, light in water 🙂
i love it too… water and fire
love the reflection, well done.
reflections are my favorite
goodness! these few lines brought such passion and emotion for me! lovely!
i’m so happy about that 😉
Calming piece, enjoyed it. Happy New Year!
you too, and yes it brings me peace too. glad you enjoyed
Love that last line. Reflecting…burning–beautifully contemplative.
Contemplating as we reflect … very nice.
Happy Rally …
I have to say that of the fifteen poems that I read before yours from the poetry palace yours is my favorite…simple, clean, and thought provoking. thank you for sharing! I think I’ll follow your site, come say hi some time…
wow what an honor.. thanks for your comment. I’m off to visit your site now. see you again soon
Oh, I like this. So sudden in the start, so reflective at the end.
i like that part too. thanks for commenting.. 😉 came to me so suddenly