especially when

on the pathway to greatness
realized, by your form
and your flow
the way it washes into me
especially when i’m not looking

© r.e.l. 4/18/11

image “sun beach”

posted for Thursday Poets Rally 4/21-4/27/11 on Promising Poets

Advertisements

58 thoughts on “especially when

  1. Its awesome when the ones around us support us and know our true inspiration..and encourage us to grow.. “wave on wave” in the words of Pat Green

    Kudos~~ Jen

    • nice idea… yes, the photo (especially with close focus on the grass and blurred ocean) really does something to these words… in fact, the photo came first before i brought on the words

  2. Loved this blog and your poem! “especially when I’m not looking” is fitting closure to your poem. The photograph is beautiful and appropriate. I like how it connects to your poem.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s