my twists, your turns

i see you
only partly
and maybe later
you’ll know
the difference between
my twists
and your turns

whisper to me,
snakelike path
of wholeness
you deserve
a view

© r.e.l. 4/15/11

image on mt. tamalpais in mill valley

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posted for Poetry Potluck 4/17-4/23/11 on Jingle Poetry