together
in me,
deep
moving imagination
that you are,
call me
to a place
that works
in solitude
living
lightly,
accept me
never forgetting
that i
live in a circle
that repasses
that which
occurred
yet sees
its tunnel
to shine
© r.e.l. 11/1/11
image by simeon’s clay art
Posted for Thursday Poet’s Rally 11/3-11/9/11 on the Poetry Palace
Useful point of view, makes a refreshing change from the rubbish loads of commentators post on this topic.
Beautiful poem. And I love the whole look of your page as if I have tiptoed into a secret reading room.
i love that comment, thank you 🙂
a gentle and lovely touch of yours, enjoyed it very much.
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a gentle and lovely touch of yours, enjoyed it very much.
🙂
thanks much 🙂
Its good to get back to your wonderful poetry. I have missed it.
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I appreciate your support 🙂
in this divine poem, i get that calmness of serenity in the verses.
me too, thanks for stopping by
Well done spoken word poem, demands you to read it aloud. Good Job.
Shoeless
nice perspective, thanks. i like that
Perfect! I read this over and again. xxx
wow, happy to hear
This is intriguing. I really love the feel of your poem, the flow of the words, and the blurring of the lines. Well written.
i am happy to create burning lines…
Beautiful 🙂
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glad you enjoyed @SmoothSongsSoft 😉 as usual, thanks for your support
how lovely.
how lovely.
thank you
I think this will need some pondering for me as I think I may be coming at it from the wrong angle (if that makes any sense?), but it did stir something in my mind and I like poetry to do that. Well done!
all angles are the right angle. everyone reads poems with their own eye. i especially like to give my words multiple meaning…
Nice piece on a part of the self, which really isn’t — muse-ful.
thanks for writing and sharing.