imagine me
as crazy as you
in your forest
that smiles with your sound
i see you
don’t go
touch me again
in only a second
…i knew you
© r.e.l. 10/23/11
image by s i m s h a
Posted for Poetry Picnic 10/23-10/30/11 on Gooseberry Garden
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Simple, complex – enchanting poem
thank you much 😉
Lovely, and sad. Well written!
not sad for me but i know that each reader has his or her own feeling in any poem. it’s ok to express sadness anyway (or craziness 😉
I can relate to the sentiment in this. A wonderful feeling, well expressed!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/23/the-wolf-and-the-rose/
thank you… i’m happy how it turned out too…
amazing one,
😉
thanks glad you are feeling crazy now 🙂
Simply deep and deeply simple. I love it! xoXox
yes 😉
in only a second, I know you?
smiles, a cool read.
🙂
glad you enjoyed 🙂
glad you enjoyed… yes, only a second
amazing in only a second you know me that is really amazing and well done
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/25/changing-lands/
😉
So much can happen in a second, great write 🙂
it sure can…