that holds it all

you drift

you feel

your way to me

as steam


in your way

that holds it all



a prize

© r.e.l. 8/19/11

Posted for Poetry Picnic 8/21-8/27/11 on Gooseberry Garden

image in a japanese garden


28 thoughts on “that holds it all

  1. I like the feel of this very much. I think we as poets need to feel more comfortable leaving good enough alone and letting it stand on it’s own. And if I haven’t said beore I love this page. Your header and name are awesome.

    • i agree with you. i often feel more content writing (and reading) poems when there are less words, and more feeling involved…

      thanks so much for your compliments on my blog, and logo (which i drew and designed myself) and name (that came to me one day on a whim… while i was having one of those really busy days– and i just knew 🙂

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