you drift
you feel
your way to me
as steam
seeping…
in your way
that holds it all
together
somehow
a prize
© r.e.l. 8/19/11
Posted for Poetry Picnic 8/21-8/27/11 on Gooseberry Garden
image in a japanese garden
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Nice! Vivid and smooth.
My poem for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/
thanks, charles.. smooth as steam…
Wow, this is in every rescpet what I needed to know.
i’m so happy… great, please stop by again
Right on-this heelpd me sort things right out.
great, i’m glad to be an inspiration
Each person has its own way of holding things together 🙂
here’s mine: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/vanished/
.. definitely.
Wow
I can almost smell it
😉
I like the feel of this very much. I think we as poets need to feel more comfortable leaving good enough alone and letting it stand on it’s own. And if I haven’t said beore I love this page. Your header and name are awesome.
i agree with you. i often feel more content writing (and reading) poems when there are less words, and more feeling involved…
thanks so much for your compliments on my blog, and logo (which i drew and designed myself) and name (that came to me one day on a whim… while i was having one of those really busy days– and i just knew 🙂
Hot, steamy, sensual. A very nice read.
yes, i can feel the warmth of the steam too… the photo is taken in japan, i believe at a hot springs.
thanks for your comments ….
super lovely.
Thanks for sharing.
any time, jingle 😉 i always look forward to sunday poetry nights…
Wow… very smooth…
thanks 😉
Love the steam imagery. Love the hair over your face.
thanks for the compliments on my photo… steam makes for great imagery always — in real life too 😉
If infrmoatoin were soccer, this would be a goooooal!
thanks. .it’s “holds it all” 😉
Nicely wrought poem and what a lovely blog and theme. Kudos! Happy picnic.
thanks, glad you enjoy my blog… i put a lot of heart and soul into it. see you again soon
Lovely…
thx 😉
very very disciplined poetry- brief yet full of meaning.. 🙂 nice my friend!
thanks…I always love hearing from you…