i don’t know how
you do what you do
but you do it
way of being
dear mountain stream,
speak to me
as loud as you wish
© r.e.l. 8/20/11
image by s i m s h a
Posted for Poetry Picnic 8/21-8/27/11 on Gooseberry Garden
24 thoughts on “dear mountain stream”
I live in the mountains of Colorado and understand your spiritual connection with the stream. Thank you for sharing it.
you’re welcome… this photo is taken in a special garden by simeon schatz, either cold fog or warm steam always.. glad you enjoyed.
I am a water rat, and this picture speaks to me, as you nicely stated in this one 🙂
here’s mine: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/19/fragment-of-yesteryear/
it’s a special waterfall true to my heart… spoke to me too 😉
love the setting, beautiful enjoyment.
moment captured well in the photo.. 😉
I wanted it to say “as loudly as you wish” – but aside from that, I thought this was beautiful. Great depth of feeling in a few words!!
p.s. normal grammar rules do not hold true in my poems 🙂
brilliant, keep shining.
Happy Poetry Picnic!
thank you… through this sparkling water, i’m shining 😉
I love this. I can just hear the water and feel the spray. Thank you! 🙂
me too 😉
In love with this! Beautiful! The pic is amazing too! Happy Rally!
thanks @YourPoetryRT for passing this one along on twitter in your newsletter. much appreciated!
thank you… see you again soon..
Holy shziint, this is so cool thank you.
you’re welcome. i agree, especially the photo
Thanks for sharing. What a plaeusre to read!
you’re welcome 🙂
Awesome blog, it’s just like a game for me! It’s so infomative and usefull, thanks a lot! If you post more of this great stuff, I’ll visit your blog again!
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