come to me in a dream from far away, through smoky eyes or darkened skies. fly…
do i describe a land or courage that only i know?
the river is near to take us
with few words it speaks clearly…
i felt you watch me as i slept. i reached my arms out
did you feel them?
you are listening… say something to me, beautiful one
© r.e.l. 1/7/11
Image of a liquid star
Submitted for Thursday Poets Rally week 37 (1/13-1/19/11) on Promising Poets
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Ahhhhh. a convesation with an angel!
how peaceful
full of hope,
full of quietness,
full of Zen…
Robin, dear Robin
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yes, full of all of this.. 😉
This is hauntingly beautiful, Robin. And the images are exquisite. As a would be artist, I love color and texture and these have both. Lovely blog.
thank you… i spend a lot of time matching the words to the image and vice versa as they go together… thanks for your words… 😉
elegant.
your words touch.
the last line is powerful….
Happy Rally.
🙂
thanks, your comments always appreciated, jingle 😉
Dreams often bring truths as well as hope. Your dreams may be showing the one that comes from the land of courage.
Beautiful poem.
yes, my courage… i am happy for your comments…
Beautifully dreamy–your poem and the image, Robin.
thanks… i love stars and as soon as i saw the “liquid star” i knew… thanks for your comment
A mesmerizing write…especially connected with the lines:
“the river is near to take us
with few words it speaks clearly…”
Thank you so much for sharing.
you’re welcome, meremortal.. any time 🙂
dreams make wonderful writes! here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
yes …
what a beautiful image ! love it
thanks, i thought so too.. a liquid star. wow.
Blessed poem! 😛 Stunning ^^~
thank you… it wrote itself
Nice 1 Pal..
The Pic you’ve uploaded is even awesome
Take a look on my work
A Poetry for the Nation ..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/blood-and-sweat-form-patriotism/
!! Happy rally !!
thanks… on my way over.
beautiful…is all i can say.
i appreciate your comment 😉
Mysterious and beautiful! I love the quiet, fantasy-like tone, emphasized by the image. Great piece!
yes, fantasy-like… and mysterious. thanks for your comments…
how beautifulll…
wonderfully written
thank you… 🙂
Such a dreamy poem. I felt like I was hearing an angelic voice while I was floating through the mist and harps were playing.
Beautiful.
Yours sincerely,
Philharmonic poet.
yes, i can see that you (and others) find that i might be speaking to an angel with my words… i was actually speaking to a person.. (the energy, the spirit) as it’s possible to create yourself in that form when you are thinking of someone.
charming poem and picture… I’m out of words! 😉
thank you… me too 🙂
” felt you watch me as i slept”
this is pretty, sweet.
glad it touched you… thanks for visiting….
i love how you use abstractness in a subtle yet powerful way.
Kudos Robin
Hope we stay literary connected.
Love and Light
thanks, i appreciate your compliments… it’s a state of mind that comes and goes…
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xxx
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