it moves through…
you don’t know what
if you give up
on that fire that relies upon
nothing beyond itself for
© r.e.l. 1/18/12
image by simeon schatz
Posted for Thursday Poet Rally 1/25-31/12 on Promising Poets Parking Lot
9 thoughts on “relied upon”
Excellent, encouraging words!
thank you, charles… glad you enjoyed 😉
love the tree imagery, wow,
awesome.. yes, i love that photo too. it inspired my writing…
Powerful image and superb verse to match, a truly fine post.
thank you, it was powerful to write too..
An evocative poem. I enjoyed reading it.
just awesome…the words themselves are enough for encouraging ny1…:)