hear me
as if you feel
who i am…
as if you’re about
to melt
but don’t know how
as if you are the only person
who i’m speaking
to now
as if these words
mean something
maybe the world
to you
as if i’ll know
your heart is
beating faster
as if
your wish
just came true
© r.e.l. 1/7/12
image by s i m s h a
Posted for Thursday Poet’s Rally 1/12-/18/12 on Promising Poet’s Parking Lot
Recited live for Jonathan Montaldo poetry event at CIIS 2/28/12
Posted on Medium 3/18/14
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Beautiful, Robin.
nice to hear from you again, blake… always a pleasure.. thanks for commenting 😉
Nice work.
thanks, come back again soon…
ah a silky smooth feel to this one – “as if you’re about
to melt
but don’t know how” – nicely done, swinging by from Poetry Palace
a beautiful feeling to melt while reading something touching
I definitely here you, Chilling.
http://mrblaque78.wordpress.com/2012/01/11/discarded-without-hopes/
glad to hear it…
I hear you, powerful expressions.
thanks, and yes they were to me too
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wow, thank you. welcome… thanks for your support 🙂
yes, as if your wish came true, exactly
mine did 🙂
You leave beautiful words
for us to feel
thank you
http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/01/you-wish-me.html
Wander
you’re welcome.. feels beautiful to leave them too.. thanks for visiting
You leave beautiful words
for us to feel
Thank you
http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/01/you-wish-me.html
Wander
😉
Neat and concise. Very smartly put. Enjoyed reading it and loved the bit
“as if you are the only person
who i’m speaking
to now”
wonderful, thanks for your comment… i like to speak to the reader as if one-on-one. glad you felt it
Your poem is beautiful AS IF written from heart..
it is written from the heart 😉
So glad your wish came true.
Be careful what you ask for because they do.
Nice one.
yes, i know… thanks for stopping by
Beautiful words.
Its lovely Robin, ..really lovely.
thank you. a great release to get it out into words..
There is a nice feel about your poem! 🙂 Happy rally!
You can read mine at http://periwinkler.wordpress.com/2012/01/12/the-visit-to-a-dear-one/
viewing it now…
thank you, i feel it too
As if..seems like it had a lot of pondering between the lines..Nice piece!
Afixxion Addixt-The enigma
thanks for that comment. sometimes the repetition does that, doesn’t it. i like to create natural pauses for reflection. glad you felt it.
beautiful assumptions and following up,
cheers.
thx 🙂
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glad you enjoyed my poem
Beautiful piece, thanks for taking the time to share it with us 🙂
my pleasure.. glad you enjoyed
Gorgeous.
thanks for stopping by …;)
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This was so beautiful!!! The picture captured the visual and your words captured my heart!
~L
i’m happy to hear that… have a nice weekend
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