you are my soul…
i see you as i am inside
looking out
to feel
with your magical sight
positioning yourself
to give me eyes
but still i ask
who are you anyway?
i know what i know what i don’t have
do you?
you have spaces
that my spaces fit in always
leaving me speechless
you are precious and tough
i’m reaching for you
you are a smile that lasts from the first light
to the last dream of you
and for you…
to see you is to hear you
knowing this about me
ever-changing as you read
my mind
to bring me my finest moments
and so i speak to you
we are reason realized
my world inside
as my tiny roots blend with you
© r.e.l. 3/4/11
posted for Thursday’s Poet Rally, week 39 (march 3-9)
thank you, Jingle, for the Perfect Poet Award 🙂 I accept… [For next week I nominate Loomings poetry ]
featured in Feminine Intent on redbubble
That was absolutely beautiful.
http://timkeen40.wordpress.com
thanks, tim.. i was happy too with the way it turned out 😉
Im used to your short pieces,
so this is a welcome treat.
Very lovely!
sometimes i need more words … 🙂 thanks,evelyn
This is a beautiful site, Robin! I’m building a site with iWeb, and I don’t see graphic options like you have. Can I ask how this site was developed?
Roger
hi, thanks…i’ve worked hard on this 🙂 i emailed you with details about the blog development…
Robin, these words are like a steady wind, blowing our of Presence back into Presence. It is a holy, holy work to make the Silence alive in Soul, to make the Divine close, intimate, beautiful with Love. You shine.
thanks blake always for your precious words…
Wonderful Rally contribution. Thank you!
Simeon, I do enjoy the unique lay-outs you create for your poetry. Nice!
Poem on …
thanks, jamie… and sim thanks you too.
beautiful!
much appreciated…
love it.
the way you look at life is wise..
Happy Rally.
there is wisdom all around us… thanks, jingle 😉
Lovely presentation. I like the way you have the stanzas separated, and love the graphic.
thank you… on this one i felt like there needed to be a big breath or sigh in between stanzas… glad you liked it. and the graphic is taken by a magical photographer.. i will give him your comment 🙂
It was so pretty, I wanted to cry.
me too… that’s when i knew i had it right 🙂 thanks for your comments…
you win the perfect poet award, claim it in my blog,
thanks.
thank you, jingle 🙂 i will accept it…
Robin – I’m not typically a huge fan of poetry, but that was beautiful. Lots of heart there…
thanks, roger.. that means a lot to me that i was able to get you to read through it. glad it was worth it 😉
please tell me a poet you wish to nominate for week 40.
Thanks.
😉
hi, i put the link here on this poem to the new poet i just found… 😉
Look inside and you understand what is outside.. simply lovely write
thanks 😉
simply amazing robin. what a glorious expression of love.
thanks, trisha.. the words are flowing…..
Love personified…Nice.
special moments…
Very beautiful indeed.. 🙂
Well writ My friend.. dreamy n so romantic..
Hugs xx
one of my favorites… it wrote itself. thanks for your comments 😉
Lovely and deep 🙂
the reasons realized 🙂
Love it!
thanks much, glad you enjoyed.. one of my older ones (i’m happy to be reminded). 🙂
A spiritual dialogue, or contemplation. I love the imagery. This piece all comes together very well.
both.. 😉 glad you enjoyed…
one of my favorites to write
It’s no surprise that you would have enjoyed writing this, Robin. It comes through in the work.