beg me
to take a second look
by placing a thought of me
in your mind
twist yourself in me
then let me sleep…
you again, who are you?
calling you
to say
‘throw in your heart too’
© r.e.l. 1/10/11
image of ‘Twisted Heart’ by byzantinehalo
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posted for Poetry Potluck 5/1-5/7/11 doubts, fear, inhibition, hesitation
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When I read your poems, it feels like you’re speaking right to me. Amazing.
thank you… i like to create that voice so glad you like 😉
beautiful!
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thanks much..
Wonderful
“twist yourself in me
then let me sleep…”
Those lines are left echoing in my head.
Love the image you chose for this poem, goes perfectly with it.
i particularly like the twist too… the twisted heart photo inspired that word after i chose it to go with the poem. 🙂 thanks for stopping by. i admire all of your work.
This is wonderful! “by placing a thought of me / in your mind” I loved it.
it works, huh 🙂 the idea of it … thanks for your comment
If we only could learn to really notice those around us. I think, as poets, we should have an edge on that skill. Love the photo as well.
we do 🙂 thanks for comments..
this is beautiful. wonderful write.
thanks 🙂 “you again, who are you?” 🙂 that is my favorite part…
Sigh, stright to my heart once again!
great for the theme this week, huh… thanks, mia. always appreciate your comments
lovely……
A++
🙂
thanks, jingle. i thought this older one fit well with the theme.
very nicely done!
thx 😉
wonderful write 🙂
thx … glad it touched you
This is oh so beautiful! It speaks right to my heart!
so nice to hear from you..