you ask me to be still
and so i do..
you lie hidden within, unfelt
with a shield strong as stone
pushing you away.
in all directions.
don’t you hear the answers now?
as they quietly become one with the search
for what is touching you?
you are beautiful
everything is alive
in different forms
watch time stand still with me. ok?
help me to let go and to become one with the mystery.
© r.e.l. 11/26/10
image by my secret innuendo™ of marin county
Published (partial) on Micropoetry 3/3/14
Submitted to caesura 2/5/14
Posted for Thursday Poets Rally Week 34 (12/2-12/8/10) on Promising Poets. Received the Perfect Poet Award…. Thanks so much, I accept 🙂 [For week 35 I nominate Jargnar]
33 thoughts on “different forms, as treasures”
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Thanks for including me on your poetry site 🙂 Much appreciated….
i answered the questions on your site for entry into your week 34 Thursday Poets Rally. i’m honored.
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so divine word flow.
love the rhymes and imagery…
I am thrilled to have you in…
scan the participants list, enjoy the treats.
let me know via commenting after you are done with 18 comments.
thank you, i will… doing it now.. 😉
Love the last stanza especially! Wonderfully written 😛
my favorite part too 🙂 thanks for reading..
Awesome. I will watch time stand still with you 🙂
Simply beautiful! Great poem!
😉 i will read more of yours now…
the last made me read this again .. And still i am stuck at the last line .. there is a lot behind the thought !
i’m glad. that was the image i wanted to end with.. a last line that hangs… i’m glad you felt it 🙂
wonderful write 🙂
mine is here:
thank you.. .and i enjoyed the emotion in yours as well. let’s keep in touch 🙂
Your a great poet 🙂 Ty so much for sharing this wonderful poem and for visiting my page as well
thank you… you are too 😉 i’m happy that Jingle found me and this wonderful community… i’ll visit again soon.
A beautiful poem, so well penned.
thank you 🙂
Oh, I love this! Beautiful!
Thank you.. you are kind 🙂
Impassioned cry. Well done. Happy Rally. Hope you enjoy your visitors and visits.
thank you 🙂 yes…
A little push and pull action going on… Good stuffs
yea… thanks for your comment..
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thanks for the honor 🙂
Love this. Speaks to my heart at the moment.
glad you found it. mine too 😉
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thank you, is my strength @TheJoyOTL, for featuring me in your Poetry Daily newsletter on twitter. http://paper.li/TheJoyOTL/1306015089
glad this one touched you…