you haunt me
surreal are
the images of you
in the mist
where time does not exist
you are a secret
which lies beneath the reason
i’m scared to tell
i am me now and everything in between
not the you i once was
still, i ask you
stay with me until i wake
© r.e.l. 12/15/10
photo ‘Autumn Walnut’ by cricketw
**this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 16 on Jingle Poetry
Im the mist where time does not exist.
It grabbed me!
http://timkeen40.wordpress.com
me too 🙂
the wonderful thing of loving
is getting to love
when you love
you love for ever
regardless what.
F.S.
very true… it stays with you to see it in everything
Secrets…
xoxoxox
always secrets. i’ll never tell ^^ 😉
nice write 🙂
thanks for stopping by
I totally enjoyed my visit here. Your site is beautiful, the collages, the offerings, thank you and happy rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
thank you… i try to make my whole site a work of art. glad you felt it.. 🙂
I enjoyed my visit here, your writing is beautiful and your page is amazing!
Take care
Marinela x
thank you.. i try to make it a piece of art. i’m happy to meet you…
beautiful flow…
Happy New Year!
A++
thanks, i found this wonderful artwork which inspired the words. glad you feel it.
You are a secret which lies beneath the reason I’m scared to tell…mysterious and beautiful. Great poem.
thank you… i enjoy the mystery…
Beautiful and captivating, I am mesmerized 😛
Oh and a side note, you are invited!
From 10:01 a.m. Monday December 27,2010 until 10:01 a.m. Saturday January 8, 2011 (CST), think about what you want to have, do and wish for this upcoming new year. After that, use them to create a poem, short fiction, prose, haiku or anything you can think of and link them in using the comment panel on this post:
http://riikainfinityy.com/2010/12/28/wishylissy-for-2011/
Share your dreams, wish list and wishes over here as the new year comes greeting on us!
Note that you don’t have to be a poet or blogger in order to do it but a link to where your work can be seen by other audiences. Do ask your friends to join in the fun as well!^_^
Cheers and have a wonderful year ahead=D
i’m glad.. i was too when i wrote it ….
thanks for the invite.. i’ll be thinking
happy holidays
Fantastic..
“stay with me until i wake..”
Loved it 🙂
the mystery… 🙂
thanks, barb (@SmoothSongsSoft) glad this was your favorite… 😉 robin
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