and so it goes…
there is so much to remember,
that as i sit here to think
nothing comes.
(at least in this moment)
yet, all—at the same time…
why is it that my body feels
all that is
all that was
all that will be again?
the truth is
that there are words to express
what you mean to me
but it would take a lifetime
to say
(all in one long sentence)
there is no question about it
© r.e.l. 4/6/13
photo by Alex Theory
submitted to Every Writer 3/7/14
submitted to caesura 2/5/14
featured in Freedom in Words & Art on Redbubble
featured in Freedom to Shine on Redbubble
featured in Feminine Intent on Redbubble
featured in Poetry*Daily (4/24/13 Twitter)
posted on Medium 3/18/14
posted on Micropoetry 7/12/14 for #remember theme
Lovely poem! I particularly liked this stanza:
‘why is it that my body feels
all that is
all that was
all that will be again?’
– it is so very simple, yet so very profound.
thanks, Angela…
glad you found the simplistic and profound mixed together … my goal
Featured in RedBubble’s Freedom in Words & Art group. 🙂
shootbackabout 9 hours ago (redbubble)
Outstanding writing! 🙂
thanks, much… a way to play with words 😉
– robinellenlucas
MINDSET1 day ago (redbubble)
Wow……. outsanding……..
thank you.
very truthful..
– robinellenlucas
Roger Sampson6 minutes ago (redbubble)
Hi Robin – The sentiment you put into this writing is priceless.
The lifetime it would take to display in words to the special one,
you did so in the last verse very well. I love this writing 🙂
Rog
rog,
so happy that you see the depth behind my words. i am truly thankful for the feature in Freedom to Shine. thank you. – robinellenlucas
Featured in Freedom to Shine! (group on redbubble)
I’m pretty sure I have look at this very same form of declaration elsewhere, it needs to be gaining popularity using the world.
thank you to all of my new followers.. 😉 glad you enjoy this one and can maybe imagine that long sentence
Featured in Feminine Intent group on Redbubble 🙂
JaneRoberts about 8 hours ago (redbubble)
Beautiful work Robin and you should be proud! xx
Lovely poem. I liked its structure..
Also the emotions that this poem exude.. 🙂
Thanks, is my strength @TheJoyOTL, for the feature in your Poetry*Daily paper.. Glad you liked this one 🙂
hi
Nice to meet you. thanks for stopping by. stay tuned for more posts… -robin
MINDSET29 minutes ago (red bubble)
Wow……. nice writing here, good words and sentiments………….
Thanks so much for stopping by. i always appreciate your comments 😉
– robinellenlucas