with your eyes, crystal clear
look into me
jump into your self
find the bluest part of you
in your clouds
there is something about you
that changed me
find it again
© r.e.l. 2/20/11
image “Agave” by George Lenz
posted for Poetry Potluck week 23 (2/20-2/27/11)
featured on Ethereal Heights by Sharmishtha Basu
14 thoughts on “find it again”
Sweet skies… these words drip blue.
thanks, jingle… all the best to you
When I start to read your poems, I look for your natural rhythm and get excited for those last four lines.
Again, the last lines take away my air.
i’m so glad you told me this… although i always try to create some special ending, i was realizing that my rhythm was maybe repetitive. it works for me but i was wondering what others thought. now i know! 🙂
simply divine. this is just beautiful.
😉 thanks for all your support…
i am trying to do a thing, i will really love to have you there.
will you take a few minutes time and check this blog:
if you like my idea all i will request you to do is leave URL of one/more of your post/s in that Thursday Post (weekly) that you think will soothe our souls.
sure trisha. it would be my honor 🙂
the honour is mine. beautiful post to share robin, there is something extremely soothing in it.
thank you… i was inspired in part by the artist but also thinking about that color teal-blue all day for a reason 🙂
Robin, that was very sweet poem, loved especially the “color me with your eyes, crystal clear look into me” …
Also wanted to thank you for you nice comment on Thursday Rally poetry collection, it means a lot! Be blessed!
you’re welcome… thank you 🙂 i love the work with the eyes imagery…