every step i take
i’m closer to you
the way i feel you
see me
as if looking through
piercing…
did you know
you are the mountain
i intend to climb
and reach?
…after all
you are the one who
taught me
how to whisper
© r.e.l. 7/21/11
image by simeon schatz photography
Posted on Poetry Potluck 7/24-7/30/11-Nature and Life on Jingle Poetry
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Nice piece 🙂
thanks… one of my recent favorites too.
Very interesting correlation; the mountain and love, then the whisper.
thanks, yes mountains whisper too… any goal you have whispers to you inside as you climb up to reach it
A nice way to show your love for the individual.
yes, and for any goal on your journey through life…
I like the last line.
thanks… me too 🙂
passionate words.
well done.
🙂
thanks, jingle… created from a beautiful moment
Love the metaphor. 🙂
me too 😉
“you are the one who taught me how to whisper.” love that.
so true.. thanks for visiting
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